Firstly, I have to say that it’s really my honor can work with Zurong, Gregory and Ashely on our project: Improve the Quality of life of the elderly of the future. We have strong teamwork and we co-operate with each other very well.
In our presentation, I cover the content part: “Elderly friendly policy” and “Elderly friendly house structure”. These parts have few materials as nobody have really done that before. Especially for the “Elderly friendly house structure”, this is just an idea come from my life experience at the start. Thank you very much for Zurong to encourage and help me to finalize it. J
Since my content is really hard to explain just in words, I have spent a lot of time to search for graphs that could explain what I mean for the “elderly friendly house structure. I try to slow down my speed when I say something quite new to the audience through my part of presentation. I try to look at their face expression and find out whether they understand or not. If I see most of them showing the “don’t understand” look, I will explain more using the graphs I find.
I think I have done much better than the peer teaching presentation. This time I have read our proposal many times and quite familiar with the whole content. Therefore, I could link what I want to present to our survey result and other group member’s content. And since I am quite familiar with what I want to say, I could give the audience better eye contact and show more confidence. J
However, nothing is perfect. I still have some areas need to improve such as the correct pronunciation and although the better control of the speed of talking. Anyone reading my blog please inform me if you notice anything. I have really learned a lot through this module, and I think these presentation experiences will help me a lot in the future.
Hi Kitty! It has been my pleasure to be able to work with you too!
回复删除Nonetheless, I feel that your presentation style is really confident, loud and clear and more importantly, you ensure that the content of your message conveyed to the audience is logical and persuasive. So in my opinion, I think that your presentation skills is really good. Especially given that you are from China, you do speak much better english than many other Singaporeans!
Guess that is all from me and all the best for your upcoming exams and your future endeavours =)
Hi Kitty! Good job on our presentation.
回复删除I think you are very good in presenting. You are calm and has good voice projection.I think that for the presentation slides, like what Ms Fazilah has mentioned the other day, it's important to make sure that the words are in Englise. Another alternative is that we can explained the diagram to the audience to clear their doubts.
That's all from me. Good luck in your exams!
Hey Kitty!
回复删除I thought you were really good! You were confident and natural, speak with good conviction and your presentation was very convincing. The pace was good as well without sounding too wordy.
I think the only improvement I can suggest is to be more engaging with the audience, a little bit like Zu Rong, be humorous, charismatic and engage the audience. You were already smiling and with your appropriate hand gestures it was already very good, so I think that will just be icing on the cake! =)
All the best in your future endeavours and continue to smile confidently!